As always, your art doesn't disappoint. So let's get on with it shall we.. First off I'd like to recognize your tattoos. Body art should mean something to you, and communicate how it relates to you. I quite enjoy what these say about you. The choice of black and white gives the piece an elegant, almost classy look, highlighting the musculature of your back, and adding a very interesting texture and color to your hair. The background is simple, safe. I would like to see something more interesting, or perhaps just different. The softening adds a very nice effect to your hair, and body art, leaving the viewer with a look into some emotion, without even seeing your face. The choice to throw your hair back into a seemingly random place worked quite well here, especially with your hair being wet. This photo could have stood on it's own, in my opinion, without the editing, but the small amount of editing done gives it quite a nice look. I would submit this to more critics for review, as I haven't done very much critiquing. Still, this is a very nice piece, and I would definitely buy it as a piece of art. Keep up the great work! -Alex
i have a feeling bordering on absolute certainty that it works without the filter, too, and your hair does this all by itself, especially when wet - but the filter may well underline this, sweetly, yes, yes ^^
First off I'd like to recognize your tattoos. Body art should mean something to you, and communicate how it relates to you. I quite enjoy what these say about you.
The choice of black and white gives the piece an elegant, almost classy look, highlighting the musculature of your back, and adding a very interesting texture and color to your hair.
The background is simple, safe. I would like to see something more interesting, or perhaps just different.
The softening adds a very nice effect to your hair, and body art, leaving the viewer with a look into some emotion, without even seeing your face.
The choice to throw your hair back into a seemingly random place worked quite well here, especially with your hair being wet.
This photo could have stood on it's own, in my opinion, without the editing, but the small amount of editing done gives it quite a nice look. I would submit this to more critics for review, as I haven't done very much critiquing.
Still, this is a very nice piece, and I would definitely buy it as a piece of art.
Keep up the great work!
-Alex
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